The comment I deleted

Here's the comment I deleted on my Nanowrimo post from a person called Publisher, enjoy it and then we'll analyze it.

Hello everyone,
Christmas is comming soon, I start usually in the summer, to be sure to get a good deals. I want to make happy my familly this year. I would like to buy a tiffany & Co key pendant for my mom Jewelry Box , the one with diamonds costs 10,000$, but I don't have the budget for it, so I will buy the silver one at 100$.For my dad, I want to buy him a watch, I am hesiting between a Rolex or Seiko watches, I choose this two models : Rolex Watches or Seiko Watches What do you think?My husband is giving me a hard time, he would like to have a sneakers but he hesitate between different models, I found this model at Air Jordan Shoes , it's a good sneakers for basketball.But, our gifts, will be Generic Drugs .I am not forgeting my self, I will
ask my husband to buy me the Roberto Cavalli Sunglasses Oakley Sunglasses, they are amazing.What do u think about this gifts ideas and I like this blog Fashion News Or this one Cars And Dell Computer Thank you a lot in advance.

1. So, appartently, her (I think, maybe his) mother's name is Jewelry Box. I think I'll try to convince Cait to name our first daughter that.
2. She was looking to buy either a Rolex or a Seiko and after much deliberation she found the perfect products from each company: the Rolex Watches and the Seiko Watches. At least she isn't limiting herself
3. Her husband really likes basketball, and she was going to buy him some Air Jordan's, but in the end decided to buy him some Generic Drugs instead. Classic.

I like these blogs General Motors and Brooms.

NaNoWriMo Update

Word Count: 20,478
On target goal: 17,393

I was hoping to give more frequent updates about my writing, but obviously that hasn't happened. All the time I have to write about my writing I use writing. It's quite the fix. But today I am feeling very good, so I'll drop in an update.

I must say, I've had a lot easier time this year than I have ever had before staying on track. Sometime the fact that I am writing so much and still having so much homework will catch up with me. But for now I am riding high. My story which started with nothing except the death of the mother of the main character to give it guidance has turned out even a little better than I thought it would. It's moving itself along quickly and certainly not backing itself into any corners that are hard to write out of like some of my old stories would.

My writing speed is really starting to pick up, which is nice because I am reaching my daily goals with a lot less time invested which leaves me more time for everything else. Hopefully this continues. I've left a lot of the "trying to guide the story along to have a meaningful plot" kind of stuff behind and now I am just writing whatever comes to my head. It's nice because the writing is just about as good either way, so it doesn't make me feel bad.

I might let some people read this thing when I am done, we'll see. But thanks for your support anyway.

So that's why I'm so smart....

Fascinating.

Watch Cait on the news!

Cait might be on KBYU at noon today, Utah time. She got interviewed talking about the closing of the Women's Research Institute. She fielded the questions very well. I love her.

Love cloth diaper giveaways....

Yeah, me too.

One very proud person

Can I just say that I am super impressed by Cait and her abilities as a mother? She is so devoted and so committed to making life as good as possible for our little boy. I imagine that some people might have been worried that her feminism and her life as a mother might contradict each other, but as I had always suspected, they only serve to compliment each other. She has actively decided that her belief in her ability to change the world is best expressed in working to raise up our son to be a good, kind, intelligent person.

I mean, she learned how to sew just so she could make him some super cool pants.

Of course, she hasn't given up being the awesome person that she always was, visiting with friends and taking our boy out on the town with her, always taking super good care of him.

I love how focused she has become and how fully she has thrown herself into the life of our son. This is probably overly theological, but it is not hard to imagine Cait as something eternally divine when she makes such heroic efforts to become the type of mother you could build a world with.

I'm one lucky wife

Tim=amazing.

He not only is studying so hard this semester to make super good grades, he also is a naturally awesome husband and dad.



He lets me sleep in until noon and keeps the baby with him while he studies.



He does all the dishes, all the time.

He is sensitive to my needs.

He begs me to let him take the baby to class, even when I don't really have anything to do.

He is fully supportive of the cloth diapering, and jumps at the chance to clean out a cloth diaper (not really, but he definitely never complains).

He thinks I'm amazing at being a mom and tells me on a regular basis.

I can understand why little girls LOVE him so. much. They know what to look for in a husband.



(seriously... they love him. These are the granddaughters of the missionary couple that took care of us in DC. They were all about the Tim at our reunion on Sunday. It was adorable)